Doctors, nurses and teachers make a great contribution to society and should be paid more than entertainment and sports celebrities. To what extent do you agree?
Medical, paramedical and mentors are vital for the society and their involvement is countless in community as compare with entertainment and sports people. A significant number of people believe that they should be rewarded with high income as compare with theatre and sports famous individuals. In my opinion, I completely agree because medical professionals are much in need as compare to film industry and athletes
Doctors are saving life of other individuals by treating them with right medicines, therefore they should be paid enough to secure a good career. Society has always thanked to the doctors and science, which help them to recover from diseases in number of times. The jobs of doctor cannot be performed by anyone else without taking courses and trainings, thus the government should pay them enough so that their mind should not divert from their profession. For instance, various lifesaving drugs are discovered by doctors to protect the people from deadly diseases such as tuberculosis.
Another factor of providing high wages to medical professionals rather than theatre industry individuals is to encourage youngsters to take part in such professions. Which will make them feel secure while taking such subjects in their studies. Medical studies are considered difficult and time taking subjects, therefore only a few individuals prefer to select medical subjects in their professional career. Thus, providing support in terms of wealth can feel them safeguard in this profession. For instance, in some country’s medical professionals are exempted from tax and have concession in tickets while travelling through government commuters.
In conclusion, the contribution of medical professionals is essential and more valuable as equated with other professionals and cannot be neglected by the society anyhow, thus they should have high income for the financial purpose.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 418, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...as compare to film industry and athletes Doctors are saving life of other individ...
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Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sters to take part in such professions. Which will make them feel secure while taking...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56896551724 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94687201907 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544827586207 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4313552348 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.583333333 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124826351268 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458855673471 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041880215744 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855310148019 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401425717444 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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