doctors teachers nurses make great contribution to the society
Entertainment and sports celebrities are being paid hefty amount as a salary, at the same time doctors nurse and teachers make a huge contribution to society and they could have received salaries more than actors and sports man. I completely agree that doctors nurses and educator pay salary more than two industries.
Firstly, doctors and nurses are like god to all over world because if some one hurts or vulnerable by health issues patients believe doctors who save their lives first. Besides, they believe god. Sometimes, they can be taken risk for their live for patients. For instance, during this covid19 pandemic, doctors and nurses have consistently been working for all days like 24*7 since patients are overwhelming in the hospital. Whereas, many of them sacrificing their lives for this public people to without any expectation from others as a results public people are not allowing buried corpse of doctors and nurses.
Secondly, teachers are backbone of nation and they are creating scientists, doctors, engineers and etc. They teach not only school books what is good and bad deeds? On the other hand, taking care of each and every individual student who are performing well academic wise. For example, teachers put more efforts because students are different categories segregate them three categories good, average and poor to helping them to improve grade gradually.
In conclusion, doctors, nurses and teachers are not only working for their lives, they are providing services to all over nation so that Government should be considered to increase salaries of them because they are protecting and creating peoples for next generation. At least pay them equal of actors and sports men's pay.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...e like god to all over world because if some one hurts or vulnerable by health issues pa...
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Line 3, column 537, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a result' or simply 'results'?
Suggestion: a result; results
... without any expectation from others as a results public people are not allowing buried c...
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Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...creating scientists, doctors, engineers and etc. They teach not only school books what i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22826086957 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55346885895 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615942028986 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.2475474508 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7692307692 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210646090565 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065594507464 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796970801849 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129053797788 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10107930493 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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