After the introduction of globalisation, it is undeniable fact that traditions of some countries are affected by others. Many experts opine that, it is a natural criteria, however, some opponents argue that, it is a threat to the cultural identity. This essay partially agrees with the statement and it will illustrate in the following paragraphs.
On one hand, it is a natural human tendency to observe other cultures and implement some positive features of that culture into their own tradition. This repositioning has helped several societies to abandon their rituals, which were once stunting their socio-economic growth and catered them to achieve prosperity through adopting new traditions. Moreover, globalization has provided a platform where several communities are gaining knowledge on diffrent subjects, which were once considered as a taboo topic in their culture. For example, in several communities women were not allowed to perform any job before the introduction of globalisation.
On the other hand, there are several communities encountering the identity crisis. In order to receive a high paying job in the globalised world, a large number of people are learning new languages, changing their attire and lifestyle. The major reason behind this trend is, several communities are suffering from the inferiority complex and they opine that, they would be considered as a superior in their social groups. There are a lot of countries in the world, who were once known for their culture and uniqueness, however, they are now at the verge of extinction.Asian countries are an embodiment of this trend.
To conclude, globalisation has affected communities and societies in both positive and negative way.
- Men and women can never share the same responsibilities at home and in everyday life. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 56
- Men and women can never share the same responsibilities at home and in everyday life. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 56
- Formal education tends to restrain our minds and spirits rather than set them free.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and s 56
- Due to effects of globalisation the cultures of some countries are influenced by others Some people think this is a natural process Others think this is a threat to cultural identity What is your opinion about this 67
- Formal education tends to restrain our minds and spirits rather than set them free.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and s 33
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44943820225 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09827711372 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576779026217 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.545337663 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.25 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216462145053 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762282155331 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648775831731 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125189332816 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0938962803342 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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