With the introduction of nuclear families, it is now considered that, men and women should share equal responsibility at home and in their daily life. Some people believe that, this would not be possible.This essay partially disgrees with the statement and it will illustrate it in the following paragraphs.
On one hand, in today's world, men and women are considered as equal person with equal capabilities to operate home and daily life. Performing and managing each and every task by the men and women increase the overall productivity and they could complete any task in a very short time together and take up a plenty of leisure time. Moreover, educated parents can teach their children on various subjects at home and children could enhance their mental development through teachings from both parent. It has now become a scientifically proven fact that, couples who tend to share their work together are less likely to divorce than couples who have limited approach to each other task.
On the other hand,
- Due to effects of globalisation, the cultures of some countries are influenced by others. Some people think this is a natural process. Others think this is a threat to cultural identity. What is your opinion about this? 73
- Men and women can never share the same responsibilities at home and in everyday life. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 56
- Formal education tends to restrain our minds and spirits rather than set them free.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and s 33
- Formal education tends to restrain our minds and spirits rather than set them free.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and s 56
- Due to effects of globalisation the cultures of some countries are influenced by others Some people think this is a natural process Others think this is a threat to cultural identity What is your opinion about this 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 168.0 315.596192385 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05357142857 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69362831575 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4407203181 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.285714286 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145903868212 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649361407734 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717041941129 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122384109673 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0137457230965 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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