Nowadays people are working too hard What is the reason for that What should employers do in order to prevent employees from this

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Nowadays people are working too hard. What is the reason for that? What should employers do in order to prevent employees from this?

According to the recent survey published in Time magazine, nowadays employees are putting more and more effort into their workplace as compared to the previous decade. There are enormous reasons of this phenomenon. This essay will discuss the evident and inevitable reasons of this raising concern and also will elaborate on the potential solutions with the help of employers.

To begin with, predominantly, the sense of competition is the core reason for a stressful work routine. In this fast-paced environment, people are in the blind race to win over the other. Furthermore, another reason for hard work is to earn more and more in order to afford a luxury lifestyle. I have personally witnessed many people doing double shifts to earn some extra bucks for their families and totally neglecting their physical fitness.

In order to reduce the pressure on the employees, employers can certainly play a vital role. There are numerous steps that an organization can take to lessen employees burden. Introduce and implement work-life balance approach; enforce 9 to 5 office timings to avoid late sittings. Work distribution should be even among all employees with a maximum of 80% bandwidth utilization. 20% capacity should be kept as a breathing buffer and to promote creativity. Lastly, but most importantly all employees should be paid at parity and according to their valuable contributions so that no employee considers doing over-time.

To summarize the aforementioned, hard work is a rising concern not only in developing but also in developed countries. Organizations should control this issue at an early stage with proactive measures such as work-li balance concept and parity compensations.

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Average: 6.4 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, lastly, so, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38289962825 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98580362483 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628252788104 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7706133906 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294020304773 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861032102526 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037297664961 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154743546083 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413294450292 0.056905535591 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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