A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might me suitable for him.Write a letter to this friend. in your letter- tell your friend

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A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might me suitable for him.

Write a letter to this friend. in your letter
- tell your friend about the job and what short of work it involves
- Say why you think the job would be suitable for him
- explain how to apply for a job

Dear John,

Hope you are doing well. I have received your letter and I am really excited to know that you will be coming to Mumbai in June. As you mentioned in your letter about searching job here, I found an opening which will be suitable for you.

There is an opening for business analyst in the ABC international ltd. One of my friend is already working there and she explained me the profile, I found it quite well fit for you. According to the job description, they are looking for a supply chain consultant specifically in the area of procurement.

As I know your skill set is also falling in the same domain, it would be great pick for you. On top of that, this job have frequent visits to different cities, considering your interest in travelling this will be cherry on a cake for you.

To apply for this opening, send your CV to my friend working there, I have mentioned her email id below. I already had a word with her regarding you. As reference from an employee usually get priority for an interview, she will refer your details in company's internal portal.

I can't wait to see you.

Kind regards,

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 3, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...tails in companys internal portal. I cant wait to see you. Kind regards,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, regarding, so, well, on top of that

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53431372549 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51230631224 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602941176471 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6526635444 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0833333333 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.442208685972 0.216113520407 205% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147010759623 0.0766984524023 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908818390812 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240394664306 0.12726935374 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812001800548 0.0580467560999 140% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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