You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment.
In your letterm
- describe the problem with the equipment
- explain how this problem affecting your work
- Say what you want the shop of company to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to complain about the working of headphones that your company has supplied before two weeks.
I am working for ABC International remotely from my home. When I joined the company, I have received the headphones which can be used for our daily meetings within the team as well as with the clients. However, within a duration of a week, it started malfunctioning. In spite of the new headphones, it started creating different noises from it's microphone while I speak in the meeting which results into the disturbance for the entire audience.
As a result of this issue, I am not able to put my point properly in the meeting which affects the understanding of the entire team. There were couple of incidents where the same issue has also happened during the client meeting which can result into poor reputation of our company.
I would really appreciate if this gadget can be repaired of replaced as soon as possible. Also let me know whether I need to perform any additional procedure for the same as your company is registered with our organization.
I am waiting for your early response.
Yours faithfully,
XYZ
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 91, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...paired of replaced as soon as possible. Also let me know whether I need to perform a...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, really, so, well, while, as a result, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92039800995 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78876912576 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63184079602 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6607579562 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9090909091 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 4.34317383033 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212329634446 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815373373959 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572460777846 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12034136674 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495793367605 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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