Essay topics: Some people think that parents should teach children how to
be good members of society.
Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
School plays a vital role in building children’s personality and overall development. As a result, many
people claim that besides academics progress, it is also the responsibility of a teacher that he helps
the student to distinguish between good and bad things. However, I believe that both parents and
teachers should have equal role in moulding a child.
It is indeed true that teachers are second parents of students thus, they can help in many ways. |It is
undeniable fact that today’s parents have hactic schedule due to which they have little time to
observe their wards. Hence, such group of people put all burden to school as are investing hefty
amounts on fees. Also, schools offer a wide range of horizon to explore, where students interact
their peers, and simultaneously develop several skills such as competition and cooperation to
achieve their goals, they might adopt wrong ways, causing negative consequences not only for
themselves but also for others. Therefore, a teacher can guide his or her pupil in an effective manner
during school hours.
Nonetheless, parents always come first in teaching moral values to their children. Despite having
responsible their ward’s behaviour towards individual or society. In addition to this, guardians
should always set good examples before children since they learn many habits from their home. For
instance, if a parent always respect his or her own elders then children tend to follow him or her.
Thereby, they also give respect and love to their grandparents, which will oblige them to be behave
in a good manner to others as well.
To summarise, it is obvious that parents should teach their wards social values and about right or
wrong. In my opinion, both schools and guardians must shoulder their responsibility equally in order
to inculcate moral skills in children so that they can become productive members of our nation.
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- Essay topics: Some people think that parents should teach children how tobe good members of society.Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, however, if, nonetheless, second, so, then, therefore, thus, well, in addition, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26451612903 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70740303935 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629032258065 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2232059642 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.8 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.93333333333 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.38176352705 479% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196448862659 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676602156275 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413664539351 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0558292924126 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397878881542 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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