Experts say older people were happier and healthier in the past because they did more exercise and spent more time with family and friends, whereas many now suffer from loneliness and health problems. What are the causes of this and what are some solutions?
It is a common belief that while grown-ups in bygone days were more cheerful and robust as they used to spend lots of time with their loved ones and were physically active, in modern days, they are not only suffering from several medical issues but also feel detached from society. This essay will discuss some of the reasons for this inclination and provide a few solutions to address this concern.
One main causative factor in terms of isolation is the chaotic lifestyle of young people these days. As they are spending a huge amount of time at their workplace, this hardly leaves them any time to spend with their parents or grandparents. The increasing number of old-ages homes in many nations is an ideal example of this changing situation. To curb this problem, the government should put a strict law on working hours at the workplace for the young generation and promote spending time with their elderly.
Turning to the medical concerns amongst elderly people, there is a huge lack of open-spaces such as the park and recreational areas in modern cities. As a result, an elder generation tends to spend the majority of their time at home either watching television or reading books. To illustrate, Unlike earlier days, it is quite visible that cities, these days, are congestive and overcrowded. This problem again can be tackled by the government's intervention as more recreational centers should be established for the local people for free or on subsidized cost. As a result, people would participate in physical activities more and lead a healthy life.
In conclusion, two of the prime reasons for this escalating transition of being unhealthy and detachment from the society amongst old-age people are the hectic work-life schedule of their offsprings and unavailability of plenty of spaces and activities centers in the cities. However, these concerns can be mitigated by the government's support.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10476190476 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75211547391 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8451652309 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.692307692 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2307692308 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178864085523 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058818189088 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482870599494 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112067825661 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601700606255 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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