Facing many international pollution issues such as the energy shortage and global warming. Some people believe that individuals have limited abilities to deal with that issue, compared with the nations and society.
A tremendous increment in the number of industries has been noticed in the last couple of decades which in turn has increased the use of fossil fuel, resulting pollution such as the energy shortage and global warming. It is argued that a person has limited abilities to deal with the issue as compared to the nation and society. In my point of view, the responsibility lies on everyone’s shoulders equally.
There are plethora of reasons causing pollution that includes, deforestation, use of plastic, use of private vehicle for transportation etc. The situation is getting worse day by day which has got the attention of the whole human fraternity and every single step towards the protection of the environment is countable. Reducing the use of private vehicle for transportation, less use of plastic and population control are some actions could be taken at the individual level. Also, the fossil fuel could be replaced by other sources of energy such as wind power and solar energy. To explain it more, a company in Mumbai, India, has made it compulsory for all their employees to use the mode of transportation provided by the organization.
Furthermore, the people can start campaigns to spread the awareness about the required steps to be taken to save the environment or minimize the adverse effects. The unauthorized deforestation and industries which are emitting more CO2 than the allowed limit should be banned. For instance, in India, the bishnoi villagers sacrificed their lives to save trees in 1730. Many social groups are organising events like clean the river, clean the streets, and painting competitions to make people understand the importance on pollutions free environment.
To recapitulate, I would say, the government, nation or society cannot do anything without the support of their citizens. Every single person has to play a vital role to fight this situation and to minimize the harm which is already done.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, as to, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17405063291 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99004081837 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591772151899 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2707276942 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.785714286 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186469982395 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593637817914 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103991771277 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1104122536 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116326005138 0.056905535591 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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