People recognize a difference between children and adults. What events (experiences or ceremonies) makes a person an adult? Use the specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.
Distinguishing between kids and grownups is a crucial process which is done by individuals in their own ways. A group of people thinks that experiences make an adolescent a mature. However, others argue that ceremonies are more important to do so. In my opinion, knowledge gained from life events, plays a major role in converting a teenager into an adult, not the ceremonies. This essay will discuss first the different meanings of the word adult and then the importance of experiences to create a difference between children and adults.
The definition of the word adult says - “a person who is fully grown or developed”. This explanation can be taken in distinct ways by different minded people. Therefore, some relate it to the age, while others understand it in term of mental strength. To explain it more, in India, it is a general thought that a married person is an adult and there is nothing to do with mental ability. To support this assumption it is argued by the society that the constitution itself has mentioned the age to consider a person an adult. Instead, as per my understanding it is more about how strong an individual is mentally and not physically.
Moreover, going to college, getting married or become a parent should not be the criteria for a person to be considered as a mature while, it should be how better a person can understand and handle difficult situations, how strong they are while taking important decisions in life and this can only be achieved by the experiences.
To recapitulate, ceremonies are the essential part of life but not the prerequisite to becoming an adult. One should concentrate on gaining experience which can only be the way to fight problems in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...nks that experiences make an adolescent a mature. However, others argue that ceremonies ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91438356164 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97083635975 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565068493151 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4752080801 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218152819888 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078252455005 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634905122122 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126915848571 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775134426583 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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