Farming is the backbone of every country but now a days many youngsters hesitate to enter in this profession.
Why is the case and what can be done to avoid it?
Farming used to be the major resource of every area. However, in current era most of the young generation is avoiding to get into this field. The world is now all about instantaneous things which evolve less human intervention and less hard work. I firmly believe that this can only be reduced through educating people about natural resources and bringing them more close to nature.
The current world is revolutionizing day by day and people are getting more use to the readymade things which evolve less hard work of an individual. This is an instantaneous world in which everything is just a one click away. For example, if one gets hungry then he/she will get the phone and order food whatever he/she is craving for. So there are multiple time saving and quick options are available to a person, which can eventually make them lazy. This also brings me to my second point i.e. patients is getting out of people day by day because they are used to instantaneous things. As the farming require a lot of patients and a hard work, which can not be seen in current world.
There are many reasons a youngster has to avoid putting effort into farming that I have discussed earlier but, in order to avoid this thing we need proper planning which includes various steps. Firstly, there is a need of proper agricultural education which tell them about nature and importance of natural resources. Secondly, there is a need to develop the habit o gardening among children and putting love of plants and nature in them. This can be done by there less consumption of processed food and they have more of home cooked food like vegetables, grains and fruits.
All in all, farming is an important concern as it brings to us organic food and natural resources. Although, there is less concerns about agriculture and farming is seen in young generation. This is because of the quick and ready made things they can have easily and lack of there knowledge about organic things. This can be avoided by educating them and making gardening practices common among them. I would recommend that reducing processed food consumption and feeding children with home cooked organic food can also plays a vital role in it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'there are less concerns'?
Suggestion: there are less concerns
...c food and natural resources. Although, there is less concerns about agriculture and farming is seen i...
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Line 4, column 118, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun concerns is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...d natural resources. Although, there is less concerns about agriculture and farming ...
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Line 4, column 520, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'play'
Suggestion: play
... with home cooked organic food can also plays a vital role in it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78684210526 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5278216455 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494736842105 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5615042196 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7368421053 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52631578947 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198349011143 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658044045949 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500526553135 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129817424122 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020694945661 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.