In a modern era, fast food is the main priority for large proportion of people for their meals. In my opinion, dependent on ready-made food can bring about more obstacles for individuals as compared to any advantage that might bring.
Admittedly, there are some basic advantages of consuming fast food for special meals. The first and the foremost is burgers, and fries for example are easy to access from any restaurant. Although eating such foods cause serious ailments among people, it saves time for all working individuals. Many people prefer to buy subway, breads for their lunch rather than cooking at home. Additionally, why people now a days go for ready made meal as it is available all the time whether its morning, afternoon, or evening. According to a recent survey done by Stanford University that about 60% population depend on already cooked food.
Nevertheless, despite the advantages discussed above, I believe, if individuals inhale fast food, affects their health. People who eat fast food suffer from cardiovascular problems. Because of increasing cholesterol from the saturated oils used to cook restaurant food, increasing blood pressure is a main disease that may happen. In addition to this, purchasing junk food is more expensive rather than making at home. As a result, it may cause financial instability. Thus, moving towards junk food items is not a good option.
In conclusion, while quick service food is available 24 hours and good for balance personal and professional life, particularly for individuals who have hectic schedule, face health issues in their life and spent more money for their meals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...oking at home. Additionally, why people now a days go for ready made meal as it is availab...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...g at home. Additionally, why people now a days go for ready made meal as it is availab...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, nevertheless, so, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23106060606 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7624597733 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655303030303 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2628864401 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339936317879 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108260353299 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788774295456 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216367464313 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474794048323 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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