"Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up."
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this modern world, there is an ongoing deliberation among people on the importance of fatherhood and motherhood. While some people argue that women bears the majority responsibility of bringing up children, on my point of view I do not agree on that argument. Therefore, I shall analyze both sides of the argument by analyzing both sides of it.
First and foremost, both the parents highly make influence on the physical and mental fitness of their children. For example, father is called as the head of the family in most of the communities, therefore they have the power of taking decisions for the benefit of their family. Apart from that, fathers always provide secured environment to their families, since they are considered to be the strongest among the other family members.
On the other hand, mothers have greater responsibilities like bringing up their children as good citizens to the society. They have the influential power inculcating good qualities in their children, since most of the mothers maintain good relationship with their kids. However, in most of the cases both the parents contribute on the decision of the number of children they want to have and also the time period they intends to have children since it is the most critical decision they take in their lives.
In conclusion, both the parents bear similar amount of responsibilities on their children such as education, feeding, providing opportunities in entertainment and other needs as well. It is believed, that parents should consider mainly on their financial stability before making children, because that matters severely on one persons life. In nutshell, it is not fair to discriminate parents according to the responsibilities they have, because each parent contributes in unique way on their children’s life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 419, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'intend'
Suggestion: intend
...t to have and also the time period they intends to have children since it is the most c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25773195876 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98231503197 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54295532646 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0711140134 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.5 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4166666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191603152296 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762648232131 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520346771457 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115634929813 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227918645773 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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