Fewer and fewer people walk on a daily basis. What are the reasons? And how to encourage them to spend their time walking?
Nowadays, technology is increasingly popular and people are becoming the slaves of such a lifestyle. Many people choose their comfort over their health as they prefer vehicles to commute rather than walking even for a short distance. This essay will discuss the reason why this is happening and what measures can be adopted to persuade people for walking instead of taking support of technology.
Humans are critically trapped in today's sedentary lifestyle and become accustomed to the convenience, even though they know the fact that is universally accepted to do some exercise to remain fit, instead, they choose their physical ease. This is because of the availability of several means of convenience that resist people to walk. Inactive lifestyle has profound effects which are needed to be avoided in order to live healthy. For instance, almost all the office, malls are equipped with lift, escalator and generally, all the persons use these equipment instead of preferring staircase. Another reason can be scarcity of time, because of the busy schedule they prefer to save time by using cars, bikes for short distance.
This us indispensable to encourage people to walk by presenting innovative 3D pictures on the way of walking. This is a way of grabbing their attention captivated them in intensely pretty sceneries so that they can spend their time while walking. Although this is not a low hanging fruit, a lot of efforts are required to encourage people. Another way is to organise a marathon race sometimes, or credit bonus points on the basis of daily walking activity, this will lead at least little attention towards the health of people and persuade them to walk on daily basis.
Hammering the final nail, I pen down saying that daily basis walk is quintessential to live a healthy and prosperous life and need to be followed persistently. This essay discussed the reasons for avoiding walking due to taking the assistance of technology and lack of time and also, the solution to encourage people to walk daily.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 279, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun means seems to be countable; consider using: 'several means'.
Suggestion: several means
... This is because of the availability of several means of convenience that resist people to wa...
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Line 5, column 545, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this equipment' or 'these equipments'?
Suggestion: this equipment; these equipments
...ator and generally, all the persons use these equipment instead of preferring staircase. Anothe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, at least, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10746268657 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70451714906 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564179104478 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9342490167 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.214285714 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317768184254 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105889881419 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773508556714 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201843450442 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720103892085 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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