First impressions are important Some people think that doing well in interviews is the key to securing a good job To what extent do you agree

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First impressions are important. Some people think that doing well in interviews is the key to securing a good job
To what extent do you agree?

Many people believe that if you do well in an interview it is easier for you to secure a decent job so first impressions are important, and I agree with this statement. This essay will discuss the importance of first impressions and the benefits of doing well in the interviews by using the surveys and studies of the UK and the USA labor act management.
Firstly, making first impressions are remarkably important, a person who's applying for a particular job can make his impressions well by wearing an appropriate dress. Furthermore, a survey conducted by the UK labor act management showed that 97% of employers expect an interviewee to wear formal dress regardless of their genders, according to them this shows the seriousness of the candidates towards the job they are applying for.
Secondly, doing well in an interview is the key to secure a better job, if an interviewee has a decent amount of knowledge about the company and the job their chances of securing a job increase significantly. Moreover, According to the US labor act management, people who research the company in advance are likely to get a job as they have a better understanding of the company and can answer complex questions of the employers.
In conclusion, according to my knowledge and experience, I think that both first impression and doing well in interviews are the essential ingredients of job security. In other words, if you dress well at the time of the interview and have the necessary information about the company you can secure a job easily.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 70, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: who's
...ions are remarkably important, a person whos applying for a particular job can make ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, i think, in conclusion, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89655172414 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98547345919 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494252873563 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.3625408216 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.75 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.625 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.625 7.06120827912 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395054000697 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193408516478 0.084324248473 229% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117934134058 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26163098614 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12505757163 0.056905535591 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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