Flooding into Ielts centorston has become a common. What do you think? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages
Nowadays, a great investment into gaining on ielts certificate is a matter of great concern. In this essay, both the merits and demerits of the trend will be discussed in great detail.
To begin with, studying ielts certainly brings several benefits. First, almost all the universities around the world, especially developed countries, often require an ielts score for their entrance application. For example, in Viet Nam, some schools will give a ticket to study university for students who got an ielts score 6.5 or higher. Beside it, an ielts certificate can bring to students a scholarship to study aboard. Second, in the age of development, english has become the most used language. So, ielts increases the level of employment’s norm. even if you graduated from a famous university but you don’t know anything about english, you can’t be accepted. In brief, ielts certificate can help you to get a great job, even a career in your job.
However, gaining on ielts permit also has some major disadvantages. ielts certificate takes 12 months or longer of study. it is not only time - consuming, it’s also costly, an ielts course costs $650 to $700. Flooding into ielts has become a common bring about the decrease of education quality.
To conclude, although ielts has certain disadvantages like time – consuming, expensive, or make the education quality go down but, it has an extremely positive impact on level of ability, or children’s education. I believe that these benefits of studying ielts outweigh its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, for example, in brief, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.248 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9665735658 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2910795803 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.625 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9375 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210160347559 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700803328764 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577587819311 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121969535531 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456699000412 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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