As we move closer to entering next decade, more people will be selecting their home nations over others for vacation. Although people have polarizing opinion on this, this essay will discuss both sides of the coin before making a standpoint.
At the outset of the millennium, Tourism has become an essential part of economy and people tend to opt for exotic foreign destinations more than ever. For instance, according to New York Times, due to functional aviation industry and boarders becoming more obsolete, demand for abroad travel has increased by 20% last year. This exposes the mindset of the people around world and how their top travel choice has been to fly out to the different countries.
In addition, the cost of travelling to other nations has becoming cheaper day by day and owing to their affordability, people lean towards travelling abroad rather than in home country. To exemplify, round trip from Indian to Japan is $150 cheaper compare to last year. Moreover, people also consider checking out different countries as quality lifestyle.
However, local tourism has been putting commendable effort in boosting tourism industry around the world to reap the economic benefits. Many people have been vocal about exploring their own countries to contribute to the national monetary health. To add one more point, difficult immigration policies around the world also make it harder for people to obtain visa and travel and hence they prefer to explore their home countries. But on the other side, many countries are now realizing this and working towards improving their policies to attract tourists.
To recapitulate, after pondering on the both sides, I strongly disagree that majority of the people will consider their home country rather than travelling abroad in future, foreign Tourism has been popular than ever and that will not fade away anytime sooner.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'compare' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'compares'.
Suggestion: compares
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23432343234 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53407756109 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584158415842 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2010015517 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242096004718 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863655897741 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518232841512 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14204029804 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249483011023 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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