The modern world is experiencing numerous natural threats due to global warming, which has resulted in a dramatical increase in ocean levels. This essay will first suggest that the biggest problem caused by this phenomenon is the flooding of homes and submit building flood protection as the most viable solution.
Flooding of residences is a critical issue that affects coastal areas, where millions of people all over the world reside. Increase of sea level, even by few inches, would result in submergence of their homes as well as property damages. Shelter is one of the most basic needs of humans and widespread flooding would cause millions of people to become homeless. These devastating impacts, for instance, was clear for all to see during the 2011 Tsunami in Sri Lanka, in which thousands of families were displaced, not to mention the lost possessions.
A possible solution to this problem would be to build flood barriers. Defences against floods such as drainage systems, dams and floodgates could be installed along the coasts, thereby preventing the water from reaching populated areas. Drainage systems, in particular, will have to be maintained regularly, in order to confirm functionality. For example, Japan, having a prime vulnerable coastal area, has implemented several of these flood defences with successful results.
To conclude, coastal flooding is a severe issue the world is facing due to the increased global temperature, which will ultimately lead to many cities being left underwater. However, the ceaseless rising of sea levels could be curbed to a certain extent with the utilization of floodgates.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, so, well, for example, for instance, in particular, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32432432432 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7772509683 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.73589603 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.916666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132019470781 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508219193505 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492922181508 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819153717966 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280750511294 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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