Global warming is one of the most serious issues facing the world today. What are some of the causes of global warming? What can governments and individual do to solve the problem?
It is true that over the last 50 years, the average global temperature has risen tremendously. The serious issue which is a threat to all nations is global warming. Global warming is the result of carbon emissions and deforestation. However, there are various measures that could be taken to tackle this issue by governments and individuals.
Gases such as carbon dioxide and methane trap the sunlight within the earth’s atmosphere, which gives rise to the global temperature. This process is known as the greenhouse effect and caused by carbon emissions and deforestation. In other words, not only are their many cars on the road which produces emissions and exhaust fumes but manufacturing industries as well. As a result, many nations are facing the problem of global warming. Moreover, due to the development of countries and an increase in the population, forests are being cut down at a rapid rate. Despite trees help us keep up the earth’s temperature cool and absorb carbon dioxide, mankind cuts them down for the development of industrialization.
To resolve this issue, governments and people play a crucial role. In terms of governments, they can pass strict legislation for not cutting down the trees. In other words, they can be penalized heavily who cut down the tree for the development of industries, buildings and malls. Moreover, many plants should be planted by the government on the land which is not used for cultivation. This will result in a small reduction in the earth’s temperature. In terms of individuals, they can reduce self-reliance on cars or motor-vehicles. Wherever possible they could use public transport, in order to save fossil fuels. Also, they can install led bulbs which are used to save electricity; if they do not need the electricity, they can switch it off. Such a small contribution of saving electricity in future leads to a contribution to the reduction of global warming.
In conclusion, emission of carbon dioxide and other gases through cars and factories and cutting down the forest are major contributors to global warming. Only when the government passes the strict regulation for not cutting down the tree and an individual encourages the use of public transport, will these issues be fully resolved.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1920.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20325203252 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0612968013 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509485094851 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5239838244 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4285714286 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09523809524 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160170680653 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534879641993 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547177080677 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112671840746 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625291439677 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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