Time 9.20 to 10.10
Many retired people today are choosing to live in other countries.
What are the advantages of disadvantages of this?
With the advent of globalisation world is becoming like a small village. Movement of goods & services and earners, where everyone is free to go any country and settled. Resulting a considerable number of retired people shifted to foregin countries from our country, during the decades. In this essay, I intend to eludicate the reason thereof phenomena, with outlining the pros and cons.
To begin with, with advent of technology, helped numerous people immigrate to other nations, for better infrastructure, facilities and earning. And in our culture generally where a joint family persist, these foregin national settlers tend to prefers live with their parents, so as to give them proper care, causing the phenomenal increase in retirees to settle at other places.
To begin with, while outlining the advantages, the better medical facilities at devloped countries is known to all, where the life expectancy is better. secondly, In our country due to the population explosion, after 60years of age the retiree have not done any kind of job, due to the tough competetion and youth population, although at western countries they can not only get a well paid job, further the retirement age is more. so to help them to earn them and support the family and by inculcating to learn about the different job culture. Thus, helps them to make bussy, which automatically increase there age and make them happy.
The aforementioned points have its own importance, however on the other side of the view, by enlisting the disadvantages. First of all to settle in other environment is difficult for them, as in home countries they are familiarise with culture, traditions, rituals,beliefs as each coutries have its unique and different and that age reistance of change seldom occurs. secondly, the respect they earn at home place is also dissolved and they have to start with intial stage, and at this age it is become difficult for them, causing them a feel of loneliness and they lived in a sole society. so there are negative aspects too which a person need to understand before settling
In conclusion it can be reiterated that it cannot be denied that every aspects have its two folds, while elobrating them carefully and analyse them as per own strength weekness, a retired person has to take decision.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1928.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06036745407 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81078212401 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561679790026 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.0296410575 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.714285714 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2142857143 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0990621389283 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0368675396693 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280453426841 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0583845056027 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245173900571 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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