Governments should spend more money on education than on recreation and sports. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, spending money on learning than on recreation and sports by the government has sparked a heated debate. I am inclined to believe that education of a society is more important than supporting people for sports and entertainment, because if people are more educated they will spend more time on sports and recreated activities for their physical and mental health. Moreover, educated people are more supposed to earn enough money to spend on these activities.
From a social standpoint, literacy might improve the life of humans as a learned man or woman have enough knowledge about what aspects of life is important to invest in them for improving prosperity. As a result, he or she can balance his or her life by spending time on physical activities and having more fun for his or her health. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that 80% of professional athletes are educated and they spend 30% of their time on their hobbies.
Within the realm of society, having recreation and doing sport needs money. Educated people have more possibilities to earn money and as a result, they are more supposed to can spend money on sport and leisure activities. According to my own experience, when I got my MSc degree, I had more alternative work to choose, and I could get a good job in a famous hospital that provided me with a good salary and then I could go to the gym and have more money for traveling and recreation.
To conclude, If a society has more educational Knowledge, people will be richer and therefore they will have knowledge and money for exercising and recreation to have a healthy body and mind. Then it is clear that education is more crucial than sport and recreation for spending money by the government.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, then, therefore, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86319218241 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81023120791 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485342019544 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.8834410035 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.727272727 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9090909091 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371633514608 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18484087143 0.084324248473 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122945041383 0.0667982634062 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255186446234 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122616515381 0.056905535591 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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