The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The increase in number of overweight people is putting more tension on the healthcare system considering the health issues involved with obesity. There are some individuals think that the best approach to handle this problem is to include more physical education at school level. I am an advocate of including physical training in school syllabus. I shall explain the same in this essay.
Firstly, to overcome the current obesity issues, a long term approach is needed which will make the upcoming generation fit and healthy. According to the national survey, only 2 out of 10 kids are physically active in United States. Including physical activity in school syllabus will make sure that kids are hyper active at younger age and will also give them opportunity to increase their interest in any particular sports. Such encouragement will also give them knowledge on how to eat right and will motivate them to stay fit.
Another point to consider is that more sports lessons included for children in schools will probably help their parents to get attracted towards fitness. For instance, a sporty kid can motivate directly or indirectly its family members and parents may be involved to encourage their kid. IF all the members of the family are involved in sports or any physical activity, there are more chances of living healthy and longer life. This is the most natural way to improve public health.
In conclusion, to deal with an increasing population of obesity, changing the lifestyle of the coming generation by introducing sport in schools is the easiest and most effective method to use.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07575757576 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61945991531 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609848484848 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2004892517 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.076923077 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225043319235 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801046496266 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0966032028289 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1456018881 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129435470373 0.056905535591 227% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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