The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in the towns and cities closing.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples form your knowledge or experience.
Because of the increasing number of online stores and their buyers, some people believe that local shops in the cities might shut down. In my opinion, I also feel the same way as online shopping has made everyone’s life so easier as compared to visiting a local market amongst the hustle and bustle of traffic.
It has been observed that from the past few years, since IT revolution has started, businesses are moving towards the clouds as they provide better opportunity and a vast number of customers access which in turns make a business profitable. The system does not only benefit the owner, but consumers are also benefitted in the same way. Fashion and cuisine from all over the world are available on click of one button irrespective of the location you reside in. Industrialization and globalization have been achieved in true sense because of the increasing demand and supply chain from most part of the globe.
Not only this trend has helped giant entrepreneurs to achieve their business goals, internet has also helped millions of small sellers to grow their in-house business. But due to boosting of online stores, local businesses, who do not have exposure of the world with latest technologies are facing severe crisis in keeping up with their counter parts. The losses which are incurred because of less sales have made it impossible for fewer to run their businesses and they are on verge of closing. Last time when I visited a supermarket, fewer people were there for their daily needs, but the important thing I observed that most of the items were either about to expire or most of the shelves were empty.
So in conclusion, if expansion of business and profitability is the goal of any business person in these days, taking it online is must.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 231, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ping has made everyone’s life so easier as compared to visiting a local market amo...
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Line 3, column 262, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
..., who do not have exposure of the world with latest technologies are facing severe crisis i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in conclusion, in my opinion, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8642384106 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61620628533 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596026490066 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.0200202905 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.545454545 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4545454545 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0839071095887 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0320104792688 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323423750009 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0534229092982 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298762393368 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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