You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year old child.
Write a letter to the parents. In your letter
explain why you would like the job
give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ
say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia
Dear Sir or Madam
Greetings! I saw your advertisement in the magazine regarding a baby-sitter for six months. I would like to present my case for this amazing job. Moved recently to Australia, I’m looking for a part time job which also suits my previous experience and is fun to do. Currently, I’m studying MBA from ABC Business School.
As this job demands patience and creativity, I would like to tell you that I adore kids a lot and have worked with them in my previous play-school job in India. This gave me the required expertise to handle them with love and care. Because I’ve spent lots of time with children, I also learnt different food recipes which are delicious and healthy at the same time.
If I’m given this job, I would spend my leisure time discovering culture of this country and with the help of your family, I’ll get to know about local cuisine. I’m also interested in baby’s day out rather that sitting and watching TV at home.
Thanks
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 194, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ecently to Australia, I’m looking for a part time job which also suits my previous experi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68604651163 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50602303126 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674418604651 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0539759282 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5555555556 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183583684252 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723825188323 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645685872159 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121311986288 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052759935093 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.