Higher education funding by the government, students pay all the cost or government arrange loan. what are the advantages of these three ways?
In major countries, Funding for higher education can be sponsored by the government. Even though one side enormous benefits, but still need to be considered for analysing its advantages.
Probably it seems that people should get the support of the government to pursue their studies after schooling. this means that impoverished pupils could not possible to continue their education when they finished their schools, whereas a person from a wealthy background affords to do it. For example, the cost of studying in top premier institutes would be more than lakhs per year which is not possible for deleterious students. Added to this is to some students would be in a position to take care of their families outright completed their schools. Although they may have talents and considerable scores in higher secondary, some people may be a breadwinner for their family suppose to earn at least for day-to-day need.
Therefore, the government might encourage the poverty-stricken to continue their studies through scholarships. The authorities would also arrange a loan from the bank for those who have good academic records in higher secondary that motivate the people to achieve their dream and also will be the backbone of our nation in future. this is exemplified by many achievers today were once upon a time sponsored when they studied their schools.
To conclude, there are huge advantages when the bureaucrats subsidize the fee for needy people compare to well-to-do. this leads to ameliorate the education system and find out the best technocrats for our country. The authorities should also ensure the track record of the students who avail the sponsors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, at least, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2947761194 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82308609567 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608208955224 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1482626187 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.153846154 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110902381348 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437576393614 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461355440737 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0736893362209 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193828175811 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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