Some people think that they can be fit by going to gym, while other think that there are other better way to remain fit.
Discuss both the views with your opinion.
Keeping the body robust can develop in many ways. Many believe that going to the gym makes the one maintain their body strong enough, where according to someone, doing other exercises also keeps them strong. Therefore, this essay will discuss both views to be shared the opinion at the end.
On the one hand, some opine that pursuing exercises every day, other than at the gym, retain the strength of the body, for instance, swimming, walking, jogging and cycling. These activities will help anyone, irrespective of age, to amplify the body more strong which improves heart and lung power particularly for one who involved more in sedentary work, for example, software engineer and typewriters. Besides, most of these exercises are not much cost involved but having enormous profits such as quash plenty of health disorders, specifically cardiac arrest and obesity.
On the other hand, it is widely accepted that do gym could keep-fit the body more powerful. Alongside this, other also asserted that going to gym only suits for young adults because of more time-consuming workout, and need to provide more power and strain the muscles to build up the body. Some young people doing it as a hobby, and the others more fascinated and allured to augment their muscles after seeing their heroes on the screen. Although strengthening their muscles at the gym, which creates, undoubtedly, more health issues, notably muscle damage and cardiac arrest, because when lifting the weight more than their limit. Therefore, people should take more care on how to handle the weight-lifting equipment and should carry out under proper supervision.
To conclude, in my opinion, despite exercises assist the person to magnify and maintain their physical fitness and health, the people should decide and choose a suitable activity which remains their body healthy and active.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22222222222 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47278834017 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612794612795 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2634391956 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.25 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159265013333 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640220563711 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539910762156 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998015557964 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411679062866 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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