Many people buy new phones or laptops to keep up with the latest technology. Is this a good or bad thing?
The development of technology becomes significantly increases in recent years. The up-gradation of technologies has amplified people’s interest to utilize more. It is true that most persons purchasing recent mobile phones or gadgets, as it comes to the market once, so it is arguably good or bad. This essay will discuss both positive aspects of uses and its serious drawbacks, and a logical conclusion is being derived at the end.
On the one hand, undoubtedly, the technologies have grown unexpectedly at its own pace that also made the people more comfortable and sophisticated. Recent developments have attracted humankind because ease their work more easily. For example, the transactions of money have become quite easy than bygone days. Besides, it has been done in less than seconds using the latest computer systems or gadgets with some mobile applications includes Google Pay and Phonephe. Furthermore, the advancements which develop the economy of a nation that also creates a multitude of job opportunities to young people directly and indirectly. Concerning the education sector, it leads to support teachers and scientists that aid them to teach the students and carrying out enormous researches which further strengthening the educational departments.
Admittedly, on the other hand, the growth of the technologies that trigger people to buy the products as soon as released into the market. Also, people, especially young adult are more addicted to buying electronic products. The promoters are also announced discounts to cover the young generations. The situation of addiction fulled keeps changing the gadgets that further pollute the environment, for instance, the growing amount of electronics waste. Moreover, in recent years, the children are not concentrated on studies complained about by their parents. Therefore, young persons are more dependent on getting electronic items that lead their life more perplexing and endangered.
In conclusion, in recent times, the trending to purchase cell phones or laptops is becoming enormous among the public. It is healthier to adopt and use technology for both personal and work, but control over the usage of these items is imperative.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1877.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52058823529 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02486094507 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626470588235 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3258639904 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.277777778 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128661556514 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0338617237517 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367742655274 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0722531202174 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305163903805 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.