You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter
introduce yourself
explain what is wrong with the furniture
say what action you would like the landlord to take
Dear Sir,
My name is Lilian Okoye and I recently moved with my family into your rented residence at No 8b Johnson street, Washington. I am writing this letter to complain about the cabinets in the kitchen and the bedroom. Although, I love what you did in redecorating the gardens and the tennis court.
To provide more details, the cabinets in the kitchen are weakly constructed as they keep falling off, same as those in the bedroom, after being repaired countless of times. Recently, we had a suitation that traumatized my family and I, where one of the cabinet doors fell over my youngest kid and gave him a cut on his forehead. We, immediately rushed him to the hospital to stich the injury, however, it scared us and informed our decision to write to you about fixing the cabinets urgently.
Therefore, I would be thankful if you could send a carpenter over the house to repair these cabinets so as to avoid recurrence of any accidents. We are usually at home on weekends, hence we would prefer that you send an expert carpenter who would recommend the best way to deal with the cabinets.
Kindly treat as urgent and thank you in anticipation.
Yours faithfully,
Lilian Okoye.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2024-06-14 | asmita acharya | 73 | view |
| 2023-01-19 | ielts_tony | 73 | view |
| 2022-12-31 | SOJI | 73 | view |
| 2022-12-26 | lokeshpareek87 | 81 | view |
| 2022-12-26 | lokeshpareek87 | 73 | view |
- Housing shortage in big cities can cause severe social consequences Some people believe that only government actions can solve this problem To what extent do you agree 89
- You are a club secretary An expert from a different country recently gave a talk at the club Write a letter to thank him her and say how club members enjoyed it Include the following in your letter When and where did the talk take place Explain why the me 81
- Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we don t need Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives Which viewpoint do you agree with Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example 84
- You are a member of an organization which meets regularly in a restaurant The most recent meal you had was not satisfactory and you were very disappointed with the quality of food and the behaviour of the staff Write a letter to the manager of the restaur 59
- Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children Do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience You should write at least 250 words 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 102, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...over the house to repair these cabinets so as to avoid recurrence of any accidents. We a...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, therefore, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79807692308 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62792173269 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668269230769 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.4295266685 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183300960392 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707126905853 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421167064901 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995373848887 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643111816661 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.