An increasing number of developing countries are expanding their tourist industry. Why do you think it is the case? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
In this modern era, many developing nations are growing expansion in the development of the tourism sector to attract the tourists who are living not only inside the country but also at the national boundary. And, I firmly think it is a sign of positive development.
Apparently, due to globalization and westernization. many foreign travelers have to travel for work across the globe. While traveling to different countries, individuals also like to see the historical monuments of a new place whether that it's developed or under-developed. In addition, they like to enjoy different cultures and traditions while traveling for work in other countries. Hence, to attract foreign tourists, the nation must provide convenient means of traveling in the form of transportation along with a good standard of living even if it is a developing country. For example, many tourists spots in developing countries such as Bangladesh, India, and Nepal have been closed down due to improper infrastructure and poor transportation even though the government can generate money if necessary steps are taken because if a government cannot provide comfort to travelers, there is no chance to earn revenue from the tourism sector. Therefore, developing nations are investing money in the tourism sector to provide an ambiance in different states to attract tourists as well as generate revenue for themselves.
Expanding the tourism industry is a good initiative by some developing countries because it helps them to develop the economy of the country. In other words, when a large number of tourists come to a country to see the spectacular places, locals get the opportunities to do different businesses which results in increasing money flow and a flourishing nation's economic condition. To exemplify, a study conducted by Oxford University reveals that seventy percent of the government revenue in India comes from the tourism sector due to a large number of tourists who are coming from around the world. Consequently, every state in developing countries should take a necessary step to improve the tourism industry.
To conclude, attracting travelers from every corner of the world is a pivotal cause of expanding the tourism sector which is positive development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, consequently, hence, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1921.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39606741573 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07907582373 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525280898876 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.2189344065 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.214285714 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4285714286 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20942904952 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730720462138 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574960260887 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130972246752 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640313002598 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.