It is observed that shopping on the internet is increasing in its popularity. Why is it so? Is it a good or bad development?
Indubitably, shopping online is rapidly increasing day-by-day among people. As every coin has two sides, there are pros and cons with such kind of ongoing trend of online shopping. The following essay will discuss that why people prefer to buy products online which have gained popularity as well as the merits and demerits of this development.
To commence with, the three main reasons made the e-commerce business popular in society. Firstly, a certain number of people, do not like to shop outside in the commercial markets because they prefer to stay inside their house. By staying inside the house, they can shop online with the help of the internet. Secondly, online shopping can be done anytime and anywhere from around the world. Thirdly, e-commerce websites such as Amazon, Flipkart provide to explore multiple options with different price ranges and brands to consumers whereas commercial stores have only limited options available with them. Finally, online shopping companies have also provided cash delivery options to their customers. In this way, the individuals who are preferring to shop online need to worry about giving credit card details online to the e-commerce websites portal. Therefore, the above all reasons justifies the vogue of online shopping among the general public.
With this kind of development, there are two prime benefits to shop online instead of going to markets for buying products. Chiefly, the reduction of traffic congestion on roads and overcrowding in shopping malls. Additionally, it has provided tremendous choices of the list of items on e-commerce platforms because it is a big boon with the help of technological world. However, sometimes the quality of the product as mentioned online does not fulfill by some of the manufacturers as they want to make money and do not sell the good quality of goods online. But, this problem has been solved by e-commerce online portals by providing feedback options and return policy options on each and every product that is listed on their websites.
To conclude, in my opinion, the rising demand for shopping on the internet is a good development for society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, well, whereas, kind of, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22190201729 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63145690435 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567723342939 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5759612473 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.588235294 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4117647059 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.17647058824 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149164662464 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534664947632 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472020490816 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112127245258 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492095835145 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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