An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages?
The amount of people electing to buy items they need via the Internet keeps going on the rise. This essay will suggest ease of shopping and range of choices available as advantages while discussing the possibility of being scammed, as well as difference in quality in what the vendor online displays and what is actually delivered to the customer as the major downsides.
Those who buy things via online platforms experience ease. This is because they are able to purchase their items from their comfort zones as against those who elect to buy things traditionally by physically going to the markets and supermarkets. The choice to carry out these transactions at their own ease and from their homes is a major plus. For instance, paying my school fees via online platforms is more comfortable than going to the Bank to do it. Moreover, people who shop online are able to choose from a wider range of choices and are therefore spoilt for choices. This is because they have a number of websites and vendors to choose from, and are therefore able to pick only the best available in the market.
However, a major downturn to buying commodities online is the susceptibility to falling for scams. The Internet gives cover to fraudsters who pretend to be vendors with the intention to defraud unsuspecting victims. For example, a friend of mine once fell victim to a scammer who posed as an online vendor and had him pay for a good that was never delivered. Furthermore, a lot of items sold on the Internet are substandard but nevertheless are presented to unsuspecting buyers are standard. As the customers have the disadvantage of inspecting the items before buying, they are likely to buy different substantially different from what they ordered. In 2016 for example, I ordered a denim shoe online but got a basic one instead, because I didn’t inspect the item physically before paying.
In conclusion, the number of people buying things online is on the rise. While the merits to this are the comfort it gives shoppers as well as the many choices it gives to them, the downsides to this are the variety in quality and the possibility of getting conned by fraudsters posing as vendors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 425, Rule ID: BUT_NEVERTHELESS[1]
Message: Use simply 'but'.
Suggestion: but
...ms sold on the Internet are substandard but nevertheless are presented to unsuspecting buyers ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1828.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87466666667 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7460193412 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8956964307 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.25 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4375 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0625 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19133704686 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063787995047 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739117199216 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124971493042 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686051902867 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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