Nowadays a lot of encouragement is given to support cultural and sports activities by spending more and more money. Some people might consider this as waste of money. In my view, these is very noble and demanding step. This essay will discuss positive as well as negative aspects of this outcome.
The world is full of talented and specialized population. Most of the times there is only requirement of good funds to assist these people for enhancing their skills. Moreover, due to lack of proper exposer and charity these talents gets wasted. More or less they are forced to opt their career and are diverted towards doing some labor work which can make them unsatisfactory. For an example, if sufficient amount of money is provided to the rural and semi urban parts then one can expect a good driving force in the people who want to pursue their career in cultural or sports activities.
There is however; sometimes misuse of money can be seen. Their donations got wasted as they do not reach to the needy people owing to the lack of proper channel. These leads to the disappointment and frustration. Apart from these, unfortunately many rich people see these as a way of hiding their illegal money. It is very common in practice to avoid paying taxes to the government by declaring these kind of charities. Such type of behavior creates imbalance and intolerance in society which can be harmful.
To sum up, It is always best in practice to support cultural and sports activities with right intentions. Careful usage of this donations leads to healthy society
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, then, well, apart from, kind of, as well as, in my view, more or less, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88059701493 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62692927331 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59328358209 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6433058095 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9411764706 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7647058824 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152284170428 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438271220633 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538161750164 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901527766852 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368701425766 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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