Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problem.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
What other measures do you think might be effective?
Over the last half century there are dramatically increases in the number of vehicles. As a result, traffic problem may lead and consequently, it may have adverse effect on environment. Some expert believe that hike in price of petrol might be reduced in traffic as well as pollution problem but I am totally disagree with this view. Furthermore, increases in price of crude oil may lead to other problem such as rise in transportation cost and it also affect industry machines.
firstly, oil and gas play fundamental role in machinery used by every industry. Nowadays most of the machine runs by crude oil it may affect the price of products also. For an example, current study conducted in Japan has reveled that 80% of factory depend on oil and gas to run their machines. In addition, price of petrol also have worse effect on transportation, due to this cost of all goods might be increase. people can not go frequently on picnic because of price of petrol.
There are lots of approaches available which may taken by government as well as local public. For an instance, if public transportation make more durable and frequent then general public use it. Moreover, use of public transportation may reduce traffic in City and as result it also not affect environment. Although, government and scientist both have to invent new scheme such as solar system which has no adverse effect on global warming.
To sum up this, increasing price in petrol have cons on transportation of goods which may affect the price of individual products. Most of the industrial automation affected due to the price of petrol that is why I am not agree with this point. I recommended that government have provide public vehicles with good facility.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, as to, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91156462585 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83028353389 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540816326531 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.0598212795 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.25 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155323133557 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542787438222 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558925243374 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102331715013 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657402838289 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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