Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities.
To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?
Information technology has captured the whole world in such a way that every human activity is driven by it. Although this invention has benefited the society by increasing the efficiency of people, its negative effects on the social and personal lives of people are far more dangerous.
The development of computers and the internet has increased the output of people by eliminating the chances of error and reducing the wastage of time. The implementation of CNC machines in a manufacturing company, for example, has not only decreased the drudgery but also improved the quality of work. Such type of innovations are highly crucial in every domain to meet the requirements of rapidly growing world.
On the other hand, the influence of information technology on the social life of people has numerous catastrophic effects. With the emergence of social networking websites, many people, especially young adults, have started spending more time in front of the screen of their laptop or mobile phone than interacting with their family members and friends. This leads to weaken emotional bonds between them. Additionally, IT companies use various algorithms to read the psychology of people so that they can be bombarded with the advertisements. For instance, Facebook monitors each and every moment of its users from their profiles and then recommend the similar posts to instigate their desires. This marketing strategy is beneficial for large companies, but it hampers the mental peace of users due to their limited purchasing power.
To conclude, it is undeniable that the use of information technology is inevitable in the modern world. However, there is a requirement of control due to its devastating effects on the social relationships and personal life of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33687943262 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96670362793 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59219858156 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4825917733 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.769230769 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107199969376 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413783958865 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608645798778 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0733440535909 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464349177107 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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