Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?
Information technology is altering people's lifestyle which can be seem through established dominance of it over professional and recreational activities. Though they have deteriorated the quality of family time, computers and the internet is making human life more and more convenient.
To begin with the detrimental effects of information technology, weakening of the family relationships is noteworthy to consider. In other words, due to Information technology based smartphones have made the family members to fall apart. This can be deduced from the frequent incidents of divorce. Such issues are occuring due to over-usage of smartphones and social media, which make people engaged talking with individuals other than family members.
On the bright side, the advantages of information technology at work place is uncountable. Namely, it has enabled a digital meeting through the internet. Such type meetings could be scheduled while people from different parts of the world may need to talk for any kind of important decision. Moreover, this kind of web-meetings can be employed as an appropriate alternative while any pandemic situation like COVID-19 is going on. Additionally, computers are utilized to prepare many attractive presentations and reports at offices. This could benefit in exchanging detailed information pertaining to regular reports like an annual financial report. Besides at work place, computers are also helpful at home for children for their holistic development. On computers, young people, not only play brain games but they also take part in some educational programmes.
Undoubtedly, there are few critical drawbacks of smartphones. I, however, believe the advantages of computers are far greater at work as well as at home.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, kind of, as well as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61654135338 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10962027512 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7759865496 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.375 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1362779351 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449016379861 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057476779749 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775791468922 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188145505236 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.02 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.