Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities.
To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?
The logistic industry has seen progress in recent decades owing to the fact that not only it is reforming the function of mankind but also playing an increasingly irreplaceable role in daily activities of people. Although there are certain shortcomings of this change, I believe those are outweighed by its tangible merits.
For one thing, a noticeable ramification of the over-reliance on those devices is the lack of interaction among our society. Seemingly evident that technology is a revolutionary tool which could be able to close a gap between humans regardless of any geographical constraints, its convenience is gradually replacing face-to-face communication of people. With an array of features namely video conferences or unlimited free calls and texts, users will not have to travel long distances to see each other but this could conversely engender a psychological gap. While relationships are only maintained through online channels instead of being built through verbal confabulation and interactions, the inherent emotional values could steadily disappear from this world as people place more value on other sorts of entertainment.
For another, this transition toward modernization is believed to be beneficial to the civilians overall. With all aspects are computerized, the social efficiency and productivity could increase substantially when machinery could outperform human in manufacturing and working. For instance, with automation, businesses could easily transform their conventional man-made supply chains into large-scale production when applying robots in fields, which could undertake tasks at a higher rate than the workers. This approach could also be cost-effective, and at the meantime, drastically reduce the margin of error made by human, which is essential to the pursuit of perfection in the foreseeable future.
To conclude, the disadvantages of technology revolution are clear, however, I believe that it is overtaken by the benefits it brought to our lives. Hence, those drawbacks could be surmounted by our disciplines and a minor change in attitudes toward each other could deliver noticeable results within a firm.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, hence, however, if, so, while, for instance, in short, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.7037037037 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27508550007 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654320987654 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.1177722984 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.0 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0837458464838 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359517841174 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539612922742 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0629727683444 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625182762316 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.08 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.02 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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