The Internet has completely transformed the way information is shared but this has led to many serious problems.
What are the problems being faced due to this?
Suggest some possible solutions for dealing with these problems.
The advent of internet has revolutionized the modes of sharing and accessing data, which was unheard earlier. Like many other useful inventions, internet too encompasses with some drawbacks despite various benefits. This essay will discuss these problems along with possible solutions.
First of all, The internet has evolved to a great extent that millions of transactions and exchange of sensitive information happens in a blink of eye. Therefore posing great opportunities of hacking and leaking of information like bank and debit and credit card details, personal and medical information. Henceforth, the number of cybercrime are skyrocketing and stealing of sensitive information has become a regular crime nowadays.
The other major drawback caused by internet is an addiction to social and other networking sites due to which usage time on phone has doubled in past decade. This has led to many metal and physical health problem in all age group. For instance, many youngsters nowadays are struggling common problem of obesity, sleep disorder, stress; this is due to more time spent on phone and surfing internet.
To tackle the data privacy issue and curb cybercrime, the data provider and the regulation law should ensure that data privacy is not breached. Moreover, many antivirus software companies should be vigilant about the latest viruses and accordingly update their security softwares.
To conclude, though internet has undoubtedly improvised our life but can be dangerous at times. These problems however, can be overcome to an extent if internet is used cautiously by people and with certain effective regulations in place to stop the cybercrime.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... information happens in a blink of eye. Therefore posing great opportunities of hacking a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, first of all, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48648648649 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84812832327 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644787644788 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4341846107 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.307692308 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260035926445 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846296618073 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644760437132 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123598927817 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742402379232 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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