In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
What is your opinion about this?
In recent years due increasing trends in criminal activities. Governments officials have come up with rule to make teenagers stay inside house especially in few regions of United States after late night. Although, such notion has its own merits, I tend to partially agree to this curfewing situation cause of its negative implications.
The first point worth mentioning is that the safety of all citizens is responsbility of government. To prevent any drasatic consequences because of mass-murderers, rapist a right step is taken by curfewing the teenagers at night time. This fact is quite evident as the number of mass-murdering incidents have rosen to significant heights in past few years. Hence, if the children would be accompained by their parents or any guardian supervision at late hours there would be far likely possiblity that any unfortunate event may occur.
On the other hand, people in power should focus more on securing a specific area instead of imposing curfew. Such a progress is in negative direction as government have no right to lock innocent civilians inside their home. They should rather direct their efforts in catching criminals and making local community secure place for everyone and not just being specific to teenagers.
To sum it up, it would be ridiculous to deny the growing crime rate in particular to children between 13-20 years of age. I opine that both government has active duty in well-being of the citizens but this should not be done by blindly imposing rules on innocent children and rather taking adequate steps to catch malicious folks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 115, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'progress'.
Suggestion: progress
...c area instead of imposing curfew. Such a progress is in negative direction as government ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, may, well, in particular, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18146718147 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8282584623 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667953667954 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1949773987 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.833333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137718587083 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439316295321 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350164963863 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.07598087008 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190112244514 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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