Although technology advancement has modified the way we get information, there are also negative impact to the use of the internet. There are issues with this manner of communication as well as ways to curb the problems.
The internet is a good means by which we seek information, find solutions to problems and so on. Over the years, there has been discoveries made as a result of the advancement of such technology. For instance, students can easily look up research, assignment on the web. The use of the web cannot be over emphasized as it also provides solutions to mot of our questions. With the use of the internet, information can easily be disseminated through applications such as facebook, twitter, snap chat among others. Advertisement are easily carried on on the web unlike the door to door sales that existed in the past.
However, the advent of this technology has led to many problems in the society. With the internet, individual accounts could be hacked, there may be fake products advertised. Also, the internet has been used to commit all forms of crimes. For instance, the cyber theft, advanced free fraud, bank theft are common using the internet.
In order to eradicate the negative impacts of the technology, I would suggest that the government put some laws in place the on the usage. Furthermore, companies that are prone to cyber theft and other related issues need to improve on their security. Individual should also be mindful not to share their personal information such as pin with a third party.
In conclusion, even though the advent of modern technology has helped improved the way in which we communicate, the negative impact cannot be ruled out. Therefore, we all need to manage the manner in which we share and received information online.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 546, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: on
...thers. Advertisement are easily carried on on the web unlike the door to door sales t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, third, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97666666667 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82188865045 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.584787778 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.8235294118 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6470588235 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76470588235 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211294185174 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646510098763 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442837160419 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11192992438 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424424673644 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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