Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.
These days almost all people are working for long hours, due to this they having very little spare time to do other activities.
On one hand, there are many advantages of working full time, it will help to grow their carrier. In other words, due to heavy competition, those working for longer hours will have more importance in the company than other employees. Because of this ability to get promotions is easier, best employee awards, incentives, and many more. I know one of my friends who worked as an IT Consultant in a good reputed IT company. She always fond of doing work, stay in the office till late at night, tried to complete all the assignments before the target date cannot imagine now she Is one of the directors in the same company.
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages as well. If they are not interested to participate in leisure activities they will face serious health issues at a young age. Firstly, The person who always working doesn’t have much physical fitness can get a heart stroke at an early age. Every day I see in the newspaper some young people dying because of heart stroke. Secondly, can impact their mental health they always look stressed and mood swings, after some days they forgot to laugh. People always stay at the office, so their family members will stop depending on them, talking with them which may lead to disturbance in their family life as well.
In conclusion, every individual having some free time in daily routine life is always important. According to me, the demerits are more overweight than merits. so, I suggest we should work hard and also spend some free time on our hobbies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 51, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...d, there are many advantages of working full time, it will help to grow their carrier. In...
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Line 2, column 284, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the best'.
Suggestion: , the best
...this ability to get promotions is easier, best employee awards, incentives, and many m...
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Line 2, column 374, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
... I know one of my friends who worked as an IT Consultant in a good reputed IT company...
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Line 2, column 412, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
...s an IT Consultant in a good reputed IT company. She always fond of doing work, stay i...
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Line 2, column 451, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... company. She always fond of doing work, stay in the office till late at night, t...
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Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
..., there are some disadvantages as well. If they are not interested to participate ...
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Line 4, column 97, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...daily routine life is always important. According to me, the demerits are more overweight than ...
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Line 4, column 160, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...merits are more overweight than merits. so, I suggest we should work hard and als...
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Line 4, column 163, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...its are more overweight than merits. so, I suggest we should work hard and also s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72664359862 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39000925754 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60553633218 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4919473613 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18387437587 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061939470011 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565372365504 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127241002036 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658629421357 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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