It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can
be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
While there are some arguments that talented people are born that way, some people argue that talent could be taught and children could be good sportsmen or musicians as well. I agree with the later opinion because hard work has great results. In this essay, both views will be further elaborated, along with my opinion.
On the one hand, a talented person can develop his skills without extra effort. In other words, a child could utilize his imagination to create a piece of art without further training. Not only is he talented, but he has his unique sense of beauty since birth. This can be exemplified by children who have a beautiful voice, and they can sing difficult songs easily. Needless to say, they have that talent from their family like the famous Iraqi singer named Qusai Hatem, who has inherited his voice from his father, the Iraqi singer Hatem AL-Iraqi. Thus, it can be assumed that children can be influenced by their parents and become a successful individual using their talent.
On the other hand, a person with dedication and hard work can make the impossible. To illustrate, if a child has been taught at an early age to develop his ability in a particular subject, he will be able to compete with the most talented people in 10 years. The more time he spends on training, the more experience he can gain. A prime example of that is a football player named Mohamed Salah, who has been training since he was a child to be a professional athlete. Hence, it can be stated that with the right motivation, people can do wonders.
Having presented the ideas above, I have drowned the conclusion that learning from childhood is beneficial even if the child is not talented. I want to reiterate my stance that with hard work, punctuality, and vision, people can achieve any goal in their life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, thus, well, while, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71383647799 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45904912315 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562893081761 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0615999896 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6875 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240569590655 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806090013747 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600899541773 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149615409427 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597287211047 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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