it is important to construct common areas such as parks, playgrounds, and squares in all towns and cities. do you agree or disagree
It has been noticed that the building up of the common area in urban, suburban, and rural areas had became a major concern. I totally agree with this view, and I have mentioned in the below paragraphs the importance of having common areas.
Firstly, having parks, Playgrounds and other sorts of areas will provide not only the children but also the adults with the opportunity to grow and progress. for instance, having parks will allow the children to engage themselves in the co-curriculum activities which later will prove helpful to support their physical development, while the adults can spend some time after their working hours and can relax their bodies amid the soothing atmosphere of the parks. Furthermore, the higher the number of the common area, the fresher the air will be. The parks are expected to have more trees, plants, and other sorts of greenery which will not only prove helpful to reduce pollution but also will help to create an environment that is calm.
Even more, the availability of the square or plaza will be beneficial to organize any event or meeting. for example, one can through a party by setting up the arrangements at the square, and they will be able to accumulate as many as guests they want without being worried about the space
talking on the contrary side, one of the biggest concerns of having a common area is the proper maintenance of them. if the plants or grass is not watered up properly, then they might dry up which might affect the beauty of the park later.
to sum up, having general areas works as a bless as it provide space for everything and is suitable for all age group.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, then, while, for example, for instance, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73426573427 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45157511586 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583916083916 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.6139021327 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.4 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134174399164 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607272139293 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333478806401 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772604351558 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452433756043 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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