Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
it is noticed that the photographers like to capture the picture of all the celebreties and bring their life in the light of the people. some people consider this as a way to jump into one's personal life, whereas others believe this as a medium to gain the fame. I have discussed both the views and have imparted my view in the below paragraphs.
Taking into account the views of later, gathering and publishing images of the famous individual with a message will allow youngster to get influenced by them and follow the same path. it is evident that the young people follow the actors and consider them as their role model. so, if the celebrities encourage teenagers to do not drop off from the school and make a better carrer, then they are mostly observed following them. Furthermore, the photos will allow them to come in the light and might get contract for their future movies or shows. For example, a star permits a paparazzi to take their picture nad post them on social media platform or so on will make it possible for the movie directors to see the abilities and qualitities of the person. Hence, he might get admired and get the contract for a new film.
Considering the ideas of former, caputring the photos even of their private life will make them to experience mental stress. For instance, a known folk is going to give divorce to his wife, and he is alraedy going through a stressful situation. so, at this moment if the reporter reports about it in paper then it will make it furtur frustrating for him.
In my opinion, its is really not a good idea to invade some one's privacy as it will make it hard for them to live a normal life like a avaerage person.
To conclude, one should give celebrities some space and let them live their life.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52978056426 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43005554608 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548589341693 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3419762513 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.214285714 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257276088628 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857776183622 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510014520868 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144918970562 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403943995073 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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