It is important to give children the chance to act independently and make their own decisions from early age. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this idea?
There is an opinion that it is essential for children to have freedom of decision-making since early childhood. I partly agree with the statement. Youngsters should have a chance to operate independently to a certain degree. However, they should not have total absence of authority.
It is true that independent decision-making is crucial for the child development. Making their own decisions kids learn how to understand their own desires, they learn how to take responsibility for their own choices. For instance, a person who had enough opportunities to operate independently would become a confident adult with high-esteem. Personally, I did not have enough freedom to act on my own in my childhood. As a result, being an adult person I have some difficulties to make decisions without regretting about them.
In contrast, too much freedom may play a bad role in upbringing of a child. Thus, without parental control children may fall under influence of negative street environment or neglect school and play computer games. They may start smoking and drinking or taking drugs as well as juvenile crime is quite common in those families where children are neglected by their parents. Consequently, overindulgence leads to negative behavior of the youth and all benefits of independency disappear.
In conclusion, I believe that kids should have some independency in terms of taking daily life decisions, however parents should control child’s behavior and take measure in case of negative one. In other words, freedom of choice should be balanced by rules and parental control.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, may, so, thus, well, for instance, in contrast, as a result, as well as, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36904761905 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12277131412 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2272833072 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194851720877 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654601238667 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544340429611 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108994415181 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763863878508 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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