It is important to have huge public spaces like parks and squares in towns and cities. Do you agree or disagree?
give reasons from your own life and relevant experience.
Urban area, as well as other cities and town should have colossal gardens and public place. In my opinion, it certainly provides great advantages to dwellers. I agree with this notion and provide my view points to support my argument in this essay.
Firstly, having more parks and public gardens , not only enhances the quality of environment but also affects its habitat in a positive way .Then can feel relax and breath fresh air after performing under pressure throughout the day . For example form office for 30 minutes in the evening. According to him this habit, rejuvenates and re-energizes him from inside. Secondly, individual can meet more number of people and this will be great for their social circle. Furthermore, these places can become a regular point for meeting so the dwindling solidarity, among people can be reinvigorated.
On the other hand, the scarcity of land is at a pivotal nowadays. These places can occupy the large area which alternatively can be utilized to accommodate copious city dwellers. Moreover if these places like park and garden are built inside the towns, then the boarders of residence need to be increased till countryside area. As a result more number of people are obliged to live away from urban area.
In conclusion, although there are some minor demerits exists, we should consider advantages that this places such as parks, gardens and many wide parks bring. By developing this parks and squares an individual can have a stress free life at least, when he comes home after work and also the solidarity among them will increase.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03802281369 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58307330731 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661596958175 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7892698976 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6428571429 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7142857143 7.06120827912 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0954436592981 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031069903052 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345100593658 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0603116712438 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184308504191 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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