It is undeniable that every living species has their own lifespan and there is no factor behind this that why people shall try to save this from death. I disagree with this notion and in this essay I will highlight the valid reasons to substantiate the same in forthcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, to make more money. A predominant reason is nowadays there are numerous species which is on extinction and by saving these species people are earning hefty amount. To epitome, according to the survey there are a number of corporations they merely work for saving animals and there main motive to save animals from extinction. As a consequence, it is good our future generation to know about animals and also the best way to earn money.
Furthermore, saving species for testing. To explain it, in this contemporary era, scientists do various experiments to save human life, and they do not test directly to the humans. For this, they use different animals breeds to test medications. To exemplify, it had been written in the newspaper that around 200 experiments were done on the animals in which maximum experiments were done on rats species. Therefore, it is the best way to save animals from extinction to save human lives.
To recapitulate, individuals prevent animal species from extinction for the betterment of their lives by testing different medication on the animal species.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03846153846 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85374507389 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591346153846 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0084055031 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3333333333 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29338819878 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100045926385 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786825321806 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188828124803 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684962505963 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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