It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subject. What are causes? And what will be effects on society?
According to the latest reports, it seems that the tendency for studying scientific subjects is receiving decreasing attention in many societies. This alarming trend poses a number of reasons which bring a new set of concerns.
To begin with, it should be noted that the number of students who prefer to study other fields rather than scientific ones, tend to outweigh the science lovers. The reasons vary from personal preference to society expectation. Except the former which is respectful, the latter is caused by many external factors. For example, in less developed countries, where the dominate industry has been imported from other developed countries, such as Germany, science has no remarkable situation. As I know, these nations rarely allocate a specific budget to provide students equipment or labs. This issue would be a barrier to choses science as a major.
On the other hand, some potential problems will be raised consequently. Becoming less productive is the chief among them. To illustrate, Africana nations do not have an active industry and as a result, they have to import everything from other countries. The second negative effect is the few number of job opportunities that available for young generations. Also, the quality of life would be lower in comparison with developed countries who applying the results of new scientific projects in daily life of their citizens. In fact, public welfare in these countries will be reduced significantly.
In conclusion, considering all mentioned points, it is obvious that several important reasons are contribute to the choosing science as a major to study or not. However, there are some following influences that are worthy of consideration.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'few numbers'.
Suggestion: few numbers
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'contributed'.
Suggestion: contributed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, second, so, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33823529412 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89118357668 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3262552743 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.75 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8125 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212074435607 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580877290051 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450168125339 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108347712146 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320323809698 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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