It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media.
What do you think is the reason for the growth in the rate of juvenile crime?
What solution can you offer to deal with this situation?
In recent years, the escalation of juvenile delinquency has been receiving a great deal of public attention. Although this can be caused by a whole host of reasons, including violent contents of media, some feasible solutions can be considered to address the issue. there are cited reasons why juvenile crime is increasing recently. first, since questionable media’s contents, such as violent games and videos, are at disposal, adolescents will tend to imitate the violent scenes in their daily life. In fact, playing violent games or watching violent videos for a long time will make people’s characters become more aggressive, thus they tend to resolve the conflicts by violence. second, with the development of social media, a growing number of criminal recruitment have been held through social network which targeting to vulnerable young adult. Plenty of evidence suggested that these sensitive young adults are willing to break the law due to these crime organizations’ manipulation, which makes them become offenders unconsciously.
Despite the serious situation, there will be some considerable measures for this problem. first, in order to control media’s contents for adolescents, government should invest in the sensor system that can identify whether a video or game content violent scenes and unsuitable for the youth or not. For example, with a good sensor system, one youngster will not find any violent scenes on the internet to copy, which can mitigate his or her violent or aggressive reactions. second, by spending time on their sons or daughters, parents can listen to them, empathize with their sadness or disappointment sometimes. this means that adolescents will not feel lonely and vulnerable, thus preventing themselves from taking part in crime organizations online.
In conclusion, juvenile delinquency is an extremely difficult problem for any countries, which cannot be resolved without joint actions of government and families. By considering suitable solutions, each country will have its best decisions to reverse the pattern.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61075949367 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01542760438 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629746835443 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2355726161 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.642857143 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199199815475 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737564007738 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606511393533 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127027316852 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046962581587 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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