The trend of getting married in thirties and fourties have significantly increased nowadays. However, there are several people who believe in early marriages. I completely disagree with this view as it will lead to increase in divorce rate and adversely affect the people in society.
To begin with, married in twenties lead to high probability of getting divorced. This is because at this age people are usually not mature enough to handle the responsibilities resulting conflicts and misunderstandings between the couple. Hence, early marriage should not be encouraged provided people are mature to compromise and understand each other. For instance, a survey conducted by " Family and Health" magazine concluded that the percentage of couples divorced in their thirties is much lower as compared to those marry in twenties.
Furthermore, not only personal life, but it badly affects the professional and social life as well. People who deal with seperation are unable to focus on their work commitments which results in low productivity, absentism and bad behaviour with colleagues. Because they feel stress and occupied with their legal work, they do not feel like talking to anyone and sharing stuff. To illustrate it, legal problems are the biggest hiderence and generates fear of bad image in the society and people often cut off themselves from the community. This is how it affects the social life.
To conclude, marriage is definitely a beautiful phenomenon provided it happens on the right time with right people, otherwise there are alot of challenges including seperation, stress, anxiety and adverse impacts on professional and social life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 513, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ivorced in their thirties is much lower as compared to those marry in twenties. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, well, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4214559387 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93132745888 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628352490421 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9427704628 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.846153846 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179235876303 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582708702642 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351051132859 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944546961614 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065848131489 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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